this appears if i select the option to be submissive just bc i choose not to have a dick, even tho i selected masculine pronouns (which i thought would set my gender)
Yeah, that's definitely some language variation that I missed while writing that section. I'll correct that in my next update. Thanks for letting me know!
Well, get your tools ready, because he's got a few of those, and they're buried deep! 👨⚕️🔪
Thank you for the very kind (and just a tiny bit scary) comment; I'm so glad you're enjoying this and I can't wait to share more with you! As we speak, I'm doing some work on chapter 3! 😁
Thanks♡, being a tad unsettling is part of my charm. Your work may be 'God Cursed' but you are sure God blessed with the gift of writing! May all of us continue to enjoy patiently what you graciously shared☆
I WAS SO NERVOUS THROUGHOUT THE PLAYTHROUGH CAUSE I HALF EXPECTED MY CHARACTERS PARENTS TO DIE (i got attached almost instantly and i am on the brink of tears)
i feel like there's something more to grandmother's vanishing and oH YOUR WRITING i love it so. i. i am very emotionally attached and if anything happens to my character's fathers while they are gone author i WILL cry at you and flood your home.
also. why can't I get a cat huh. I want a cat. where was the option to pet the cat. why was there no option to pet the cats.
oh... world building.. i'm already invested and imm also. nervous. does the symbol that i chose change the story does it lock me into a path i am nervous but also excited. can't wait for more!
Pretty sure your comment has made my life, lol. Thank you so much, you've made ME tear up too!
My friend, you'll have to be sure in future chapters to take good care of your parents, now won't you ;) (*nervously buys flood insurance*)
The symbol you chose will flavor your story a bit. I have some ideas about it that I am working through, but as it stands now, that selection will sort of piggyback onto a different major - route altering - choice later in the story. (You may find out more about your grandmother later as well!)
Also, you are 100% right! Why on Earth did I not put in some kitty interaction!? I'm a cat-fanatic, what the hell is wrong with me? I will right this wrong in future updates! :3
I am so glad you loved it! Especially the nsfw bit lol. I felt the most self-conscious over that segment, and you've successfully boosted my confidence, friend! 🥰
the confidence boost is absolutely deserved, you did a really good job with it! i read a lot of interactive fiction (we love escapism in this house lol) and your nsfw scene execution is definitely in the top 10 of the list
not the main part i love about the story tho, obviously :p
This is absolutely fantastic!! I've been on a bit of an IF kick lately and I can say that this is without a doubt one of the most interesting games that I've run into recently - only a demo, too! I'm over here genuinely tweaking over how good the writing is... totally will be keeping an eye on the development for this, I'm hyped to see where it leads!
Oh, you've warmed the dark little corners of my heart this morning, my friend! Thank you so much for the kind words. I'll strive to keep you hyped in the future! <3
I wasn't originally going to, but I've been reconsidering it lately. In my next update, I'll probably add a small list of suggestions. Thank you for your input and I am glad you are liking it so far! :D
I cannot express how the great joyous emotions this IF has caused me. I'm fiending over your writing and also stunned at how early I am considering this is a newly posted game. I look forward to more! You're doing amazing!!! :D (ty for feeding us gremlins with this scrumptious writing)
The story is so well-written that I binged read it! This is really good for a demo. The characters felt so alive for me, especially MC's parents. They're so lovely! 💕
Ahhhh, thank you so much! Your kind words have fueled me this morning! I am so happy that you're enjoying it. I'm especially fond of the parents and had way too much fun writing them. ^_^
No, I think you're right. I'd been back and forth about that same thing. Even if your brightness is set to "full power of the sun" they just blend in too much with the background.
I more often use light modes, but as a dark mode user, do you think it's better to lighten the link or take the background down a notch to create enough contrast?
Oooh, I like that, and I agree. (I also love that IF too!) I will play with this and implement something in my next update. Thank you for your insights, I really appreciate it!
Just wanted to let you know I'm having an issue with the save functionality. Samsung S24 Chrome Browser.
I can't scroll when the pop up box shows up. I am unable to see anything past the 4th save slot, and I am unable to use Save to Device because of this.
Haven't had this issue b4, so I'm not sure what's up?
I'll look into this and do some research. Sorry it's causing you trouble! This was part of the template I used and I am wondering if I may have accidently altered some code that I shouldn't have.
I may have fixed it, if you'd be so kind as to give it a try and see if it works for you and then let me know if it is still broken, that would be appreciated. I tested on my own phone and had the same issue (only it showed 5 slots, but very zoomed in lol). The issue, I think, was with how the mobile stuff was set to appear through itch. It was on "default" and I have changed to to "portrait" instead. I imagine you may need to exit the story and then go back in, but I'm not positive.
Looks like it worked, though I am on the Samsung browser instead of Chrome. I'm afraid to lose my progress not being able to save to disk 😂. Just got to the tub scene on my birthday. Nice work so far 😉.
Thank you! And thanks for reporting the issue; I had forgotten to test this on mobile before I set it to public (derp). Enjoy your bath, you've earned it! lol
This is a wonderful start to what will be a fantastic IF. I had so much fun with my first play through! I can’t wait to be a snarky and witty (unlike RL) in my next. i will be following this to completion! What a great beginning even though you use my least favorite word many times 😘
Ugh, you're making me want to be contrary by telling me that. I'm going to start using it willy-nilly now. Babes everywhere! Kidding, please don't hate me. <3 😀
Thank you so much! I am so happy that you're enjoying it. Between your warm words and Milo's down there, I am over the moon this morning – kinda thought I was still dreaming LOL. The next couple chapters are coming along! <3
For sure, I will take that to heart! Definitely have had moments of that feeling of pressure, of like, oh crap - I better get busy! But, you are right and I started this because I love it, and that's how I want it to go down. ^_^
This is the start of something beautiful. I can just tell. I love your writing already and find it easy to digest. Keep up the good work and know that someone's gonna follow your work closely.
Ps. I need to know what's Oswin's deal. I neeeeed it. I'm so invested already.
Thank you so much for the kind words, my friend, they were the first thing I saw this morning and you have helped really make my day bright. I was still half asleep and could hardly believe it! LOL
Ps: Oswin, the poor complicated soul, has a few deals. He'll need all the help he can get! <3
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this appears if i select the option to be submissive just bc i choose not to have a dick, even tho i selected masculine pronouns (which i thought would set my gender)
Yeah, that's definitely some language variation that I missed while writing that section. I'll correct that in my next update. Thanks for letting me know!
Obsessed, enthralled, fascinated, I want more!
My mind keeps going back to this game, what did you put on this. I luv Oswin so much I wanna dissect him♡ lovingly ♡ so I know his secrets♡
Well, get your tools ready, because he's got a few of those, and they're buried deep! 👨⚕️🔪
Thank you for the very kind (and just a tiny bit scary) comment; I'm so glad you're enjoying this and I can't wait to share more with you! As we speak, I'm doing some work on chapter 3! 😁
Thanks♡, being a tad unsettling is part of my charm. Your work may be 'God Cursed' but you are sure God blessed with the gift of writing! May all of us continue to enjoy patiently what you graciously shared☆
I have to agree, I was quite charmed.
In addition to charming, your words are quite kind, double threat! 😇
I love my new dads so much 😭
And they will always love you too, my friend. <3
^_^
I WAS SO NERVOUS THROUGHOUT THE PLAYTHROUGH CAUSE I HALF EXPECTED MY CHARACTERS PARENTS TO DIE (i got attached almost instantly and i am on the brink of tears)
i feel like there's something more to grandmother's vanishing and oH YOUR WRITING i love it so. i. i am very emotionally attached and if anything happens to my character's fathers while they are gone author i WILL cry at you and flood your home.
also. why can't I get a cat huh. I want a cat. where was the option to pet the cat. why was there no option to pet the cats.
oh... world building.. i'm already invested and imm also. nervous. does the symbol that i chose change the story does it lock me into a path i am nervous but also excited. can't wait for more!
Pretty sure your comment has made my life, lol. Thank you so much, you've made ME tear up too!
My friend, you'll have to be sure in future chapters to take good care of your parents, now won't you ;) (*nervously buys flood insurance*)
The symbol you chose will flavor your story a bit. I have some ideas about it that I am working through, but as it stands now, that selection will sort of piggyback onto a different major - route altering - choice later in the story. (You may find out more about your grandmother later as well!)
Also, you are 100% right! Why on Earth did I not put in some kitty interaction!? I'm a cat-fanatic, what the hell is wrong with me? I will right this wrong in future updates! :3
what are you buying flood insurance for. WHAT ARE YOU BUYING FLOOD INSURANCE FOR.
No reason. Just, you know, being a responsible adult and all that...yeah. It's fine. I'm sure it's fine.
Disney would like to hire you. xD
LOL That weirdly makes me feel like I'm the one in danger.
Ladies, Gentlemen, and Esteemed Guest of all origin. THIS!!✨✨ Just. This. Yes. Absolutely. Much love. Need more. Immediately.
Gah, you are too kind, my friend! At this rate, I may actually melt, lol. ^_^
no words can express how much i loved this demo
inexplicably, it gave me a lot of gender euphoria
especially the nsfw bit hahai'm incredibly excited to see where this goes <3
I am so glad you loved it! Especially the
nsfwbit lol. I felt the most self-conscious over that segment, and you've successfully boosted my confidence, friend! 🥰the confidence boost is absolutely deserved, you did a really good job with it! i read a lot of interactive fiction (we love escapism in this house lol) and your nsfw scene execution is definitely in the top 10 of the list
not the main part i love about the story tho, obviously :p
Oh my goodness, thank you so much! There are more spicy times in store, and I have some fun ideas, so I hope you will enjoy them just as much! :D
This is absolutely fantastic!! I've been on a bit of an IF kick lately and I can say that this is without a doubt one of the most interesting games that I've run into recently - only a demo, too! I'm over here genuinely tweaking over how good the writing is... totally will be keeping an eye on the development for this, I'm hyped to see where it leads!
Oh, you've warmed the dark little corners of my heart this morning, my friend! Thank you so much for the kind words. I'll strive to keep you hyped in the future! <3
Hi! I liked the prologue and the worlduildig so far. Could you add options to choose MC's name from?
I wasn't originally going to, but I've been reconsidering it lately. In my next update, I'll probably add a small list of suggestions. Thank you for your input and I am glad you are liking it so far! :D
This is a great demo so far. You're writing is very compelling and I'm very excited to see how this develops. :)
Thank you so much! I'm elated that you're enjoying it! 😊
I cannot express how the great joyous emotions this IF has caused me. I'm fiending over your writing and also stunned at how early I am considering this is a newly posted game. I look forward to more! You're doing amazing!!! :D (ty for feeding us gremlins with this scrumptious writing)
Gah! Your words are so kind that I can barely look at my screen! I am so happy that you're enjoying it and I can't wait to feed you more. <3
This was amazing! Very well written and interesting premise, I absolutely can not wait for more! 😊
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! 🥰
The story is so well-written that I binged read it! This is really good for a demo. The characters felt so alive for me, especially MC's parents. They're so lovely! 💕
Ahhhh, thank you so much! Your kind words have fueled me this morning! I am so happy that you're enjoying it. I'm especially fond of the parents and had way too much fun writing them. ^_^
My god you've been blessed by the writing gods!😭
This IF is amazing, I was hooked all the way through. Keep up the good work and good luck!!
They do talk to me a lot while I sleep...
I'm sure it's fine...Thank you so much, all these sweet words are seriously raising my blood sugar levels! :D
LOVE this so far omg. I ate this up like a starved beast. Very very nice demo! I look forward to more! :)
Awe! Thank you so much, you are too kind!
If you are hungry, then call me Granny because I want to feed you, lol. I am absolutely loving your profile pic btw.
Hi, just started reading.
Maybe it's just my problem, but links are hard to see when playing in dark mode.
Blue on gray just kinda blend together.
No, I think you're right. I'd been back and forth about that same thing. Even if your brightness is set to "full power of the sun" they just blend in too much with the background.
I more often use light modes, but as a dark mode user, do you think it's better to lighten the link or take the background down a notch to create enough contrast?
I think just changing the link color to something more contrasting would work.
Here's example from Bastards of Camelot. Stands out just nice on similar'ish background
Oooh, I like that, and I agree. (I also love that IF too!) I will play with this and implement something in my next update. Thank you for your insights, I really appreciate it!
Just wanted to let you know I'm having an issue with the save functionality. Samsung S24 Chrome Browser.
I can't scroll when the pop up box shows up. I am unable to see anything past the 4th save slot, and I am unable to use Save to Device because of this.
Haven't had this issue b4, so I'm not sure what's up?
I'll look into this and do some research. Sorry it's causing you trouble! This was part of the template I used and I am wondering if I may have accidently altered some code that I shouldn't have.
I may have fixed it, if you'd be so kind as to give it a try and see if it works for you and then let me know if it is still broken, that would be appreciated. I tested on my own phone and had the same issue (only it showed 5 slots, but very zoomed in lol). The issue, I think, was with how the mobile stuff was set to appear through itch. It was on "default" and I have changed to to "portrait" instead. I imagine you may need to exit the story and then go back in, but I'm not positive.
Looks like it worked, though I am on the Samsung browser instead of Chrome. I'm afraid to lose my progress not being able to save to disk 😂. Just got to the tub scene on my birthday. Nice work so far 😉.
I appreciate your quick response!
Thank you! And thanks for reporting the issue; I had forgotten to test this on mobile before I set it to public (derp). Enjoy your bath, you've earned it! lol
This is a wonderful start to what will be a fantastic IF. I had so much fun with my first play through! I can’t wait to be a snarky and witty (unlike RL) in my next. i will be following this to completion! What a great beginning even though you use my least favorite word many times 😘
Thanks, BABE! LOL
Ugh, you're making me want to be contrary by telling me that. I'm going to start using it willy-nilly now. Babes everywhere! Kidding, please don't hate me. <3 😀
UGH
Teehee!
Oh wow what an amazing world you've made, I'm so invested already it's beautiful ! well done I'll be eagerly awaiting some more.
Thank you so much! I am so happy that you're enjoying it. Between your warm words and Milo's down there, I am over the moon this morning – kinda thought I was still dreaming LOL. The next couple chapters are coming along! <3
I look forward to more but make sure you don't feel any pressure to write and keep doing it for your own enjoyment 😀
For sure, I will take that to heart! Definitely have had moments of that feeling of pressure, of like, oh crap - I better get busy! But, you are right and I started this because I love it, and that's how I want it to go down. ^_^
your work is free so remember you owe the readers nothing so enjoy your writing I'm sure it's gonna be fab 😀
This is the start of something beautiful. I can just tell. I love your writing already and find it easy to digest. Keep up the good work and know that someone's gonna follow your work closely.
Ps. I need to know what's Oswin's deal. I neeeeed it. I'm so invested already.
Thank you so much for the kind words, my friend, they were the first thing I saw this morning and you have helped really make my day bright. I was still half asleep and could hardly believe it! LOL
Ps: Oswin, the poor complicated soul, has a few deals. He'll need all the help he can get! <3