came in to check if you updated - and the squeal I made when I saw the new update !!!! Oh my goodness, Oswin has my entire heart. My boy. My little troubled boy. We're both going through it. I'm also so so interested in the other ROs, I'll start a new save for each of them !! But for now. Focus on the boy. Oswin <3 Patiently waiting for more chapters, take all the time you need !! Marinate the story as long as you need !!!
This is mean, you're being mean. How can I possibly pick between the ROs? Zahn is the only one I am sure I want as a purely platonic buddy (who I will protect with my life) and everyone else is pulling at my heart strings and it's not fair–
hpw does Oswin handle MC when theyre passed out and or having a thing? (i forgot what it was called) ,, we don't see it in game, and i wanna know! also, i love Oswin so much YWYSIODFHDPHF
That might be a POV for later, my friend. Or Oswin may tell MC himself during a conversation in chapter 6 (I'm still outlining so I can't say for sure yet). I am currently working on an extra for Tumblr to celebrate hitting over 2000 followers. It covers MC's "cursed birthday" from Oswin's eyes and should be published this month. It will probably be on itch since my idea is to make it interactive (mainly just adding your MC's details). ^_^
Technically there isn't anything in that's specific about a trans MC. My thinking when I did the character creation as it is was that, at least in this world, whoever you are - you just are. That's kinda how I see myself because I've always been in a grey area for my own identity. So, I just am. That's why I didn't enter any sort of specified option for transitioning. Just know I am still giving thought to the subject and I may change my current design in the future as long as I can make it a meaningful one to readers. Hope this helps! ^_^
(Just as a note in case it is something you'd like to know, for any of the moments that they can come into play, MC's bits are defined by the reader and not the pronouns.)
New update is so good? It hooked me even more really. There's so much question going through my head as I was playing this. The release of chapter 5 further expanded the intensity of MC's situation. Keep up the great work! :3
I wish to see more of this and will keep rooting for this IF.
The new chapter was so good!! Absolutely love the new explicit scenes tbh my MC enjoys seeking fun so I'm quite satisfied 🤭 I actually like Jun a lot, he was so cute and hot like damn can we meet again 🤣 Also it was nice to finally meet Rune, he was nicer and more interesting than I expected him to be. Aster was a pleasant surprise! Ngl he's so sus, like I'm 100% skeptical about him and yet I can't help but be into him LOL He got this dangerous and mysterious thing going on and I like it 😳 Thanks for the update, it was a delight to play!! Looking forward to chapter 6 🫶
I am so glad you liked it! Jun was a joy to write, I feel like plucking him from this world and plopping him as a RO in another, lol. Rune is a character I've felt is better experienced than explained, so I'm happy they were a pleasant surprise for you. And 100% cannot fault you for finding Aster a little sus, lol (someone on Tumblr affectionately calls him ASSter and I really feel that). ^_^
Your writing is so fire ❤️🔥 I'm so invested in this game. Every character feels so different and alive which helps with the story immersion. The main thing I like is how flexible the choices are for MC's personality, like it feels great not to be forced to act in a certain way just bcoz it's the default setting for MC. My MC feels like her own person and I love it. (Also love how everyone is charmed by MC's beauty HAHA kinda Mary Sue but I absolutely love being charming so well done!!)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you mentioned the personality system because I'm currently wondering if I should stick with it for my next IF or try something new. I think the method in GC has been the favored one though. LOL MC is a bit Mary Sue (Mary Cue? MC - :D - I'll stop), but one you can put through a meat grinder. (this might be mentioned in the game too at some point, lol)
The personality system is great! One thing I noticed is that when it comes to romance options, it either leans towards being super shy or being rlly bold. Maybe you could consider making the choices, from time to time, like shy but not too much / flirtatious but more subtle? I think that would be nice but ofc it's already rlly good, I like it 😌🤌 Also, Mary Sue MCs are my absolute favs bcoz why wouldnt i HAHA I need my MCs to be great characters that are significant to the story 🫶 So thanks for this! Keep up the good work and I'll be looking forward to continue playing this wonderful game!
I'm glad you like it! I have considered altering the romance system as well. I initially vetoed the more in-between actions since the personality system doesn't use a middle-ground option either (saves me a lot of coding and struggling to find an in-between option that feels natural). But the personality extremes can still kinda pass sometimes for a middle-ground response - they just don't feel as uniquely "this or that" to me. It wouldn't be too difficult to add another flirting method either. I'll do some thinking on it! Thank you, my dear! I can't wait to see how this project grows. ^_^
(wheeze) this harem- i mean friend group for our MC is incredibly awesome rune seems like such a fancy (gal, i made them a gal in my playthrough) mage
had to restart from the beginning so I speedran it as Fiorayne again, named the horse Luchika and the wolf Rondine. if you didn't see my first comment i'm a huge monster hunter nerd LOL.
however if i had to choose my favorite oswin is just him childhood friend who's risking his ass to save us and him talking about how he felt "useless" resonates with me fr
current ranking of our mc's party
1. oswin (i vibe with him heavy) 2. rune (she's cool. also i love bard characters) 3. duri (he's such a silly, getting bitten by my horsie luchika) 4. zahn (he's so sweet and precious aaaaaaa)
all 4 of them are absolutely excellent and i would gladly befriend any of them
can't wait for god-cursed to finish because I AM GOING TO PLAY THROUGH IT MULTIPLE TIMES
mrs lunan your writing is incredible and you have me invested so badly you truly are a brilliant writer fr <3
in the words of Senator Palpatine
"We will watch your career with great interest."
also i do hope you enjoyed the monster hunter rise soundtrack!!! really gives more atmosphere when I read, cus I listen to music that's appropriate whenever I read something story (chill music for most parts, fight music for fights, and other thematically appropriate songs)
that's enough yapping from me
Love, LightningMeliodas
P.S. [i'm writing my own IF story and coding is incredibly painful. tips would be very much appreciated].
Hello again, my friend! I am so thrilled you enjoyed this installment as well! And I did have a listen to that soundtrack and it rocks! I listened to it on repeat while I worked and wrote, lol. I've never played Monster Hunter but I'd like to check it out sometime.
I'm happy to try and give you some insight on coding if you like. I'm no expert at all, but if I can help guide you I will. If you're on Tumbrl you can pop out an ask or something to me with your questions, I won't publish your answers if you don't want me to, I can just message you back. ^_^
I'm so sorry! 😭 The hard saves were broken too I think.
I've been trying to figure out Butler to run updates without shattering everything but my old laptop refuses to even install it. I need to patch ch 5 but I don't want to do it until I can either convince my laptop to work or borrow another computer.
AGH I just LOVE this IF so much! Rarely do I find an IF that I love all the RO's a lot, though Oswin will be my all-time favorite♥
That scene with Oswin talking about how he was "useless"(Or at least I'm pretty sure that's what he said, Bad memory ಥ_ಥ) made me wanna cry and Hug him forever💔
Is it awful that I want to poly romanticatize all the characters?! I really appreciate and love the merchant man! (/≧▽≦)/ Oh man, I THINK I'M IN LOVE WITH THEM ALL! I really enjoy that my MC has a meekly kind personality and all the characters fine her cute, cause when I attempted to flirt, it failed but in the end works and I LOVE IT! (Oswin is such an overprotective man, if only I can see what's he's really hiding though!) Oh, and uhm... Zahn, such a cutie pie! (*´ω｀*) But then Duri, you damn sly dog, I hate it and love it at the same time, such a tease! Oh Rune, my heart, ack, he's an hopeless romantic introverted guy that I too wanna let my character swoon more! (I wanna try to do a one night stand for MC, but I dismissed the idea, instead I wanna see how it goes for her first time with the primary love interest!) For now, chapters... I crave for more stories! I can't wait, I got myself fanning here, that's truly awesome work of fiction you've created! So far, I haven't encountered no grammar or anything wrong! Is it possible to see official art of the characters mention in the story for future update or complete final next year? I can see plenty of potential fanart right now, if any are actually made now. (人*´∀｀)｡*ﾟ+
Just, whoa, this is seriously good stuff, I think Imma do another read but changed the personality and perspective of the MC this time! <(￣︶￣)> Time to make another save slots for a different approach, heh! ( ´◡‿ゝ◡`)
That's not awful at all, dear, I'm so happy you've found something to love about all of them. If you'd like a bit more of our beloved merchant man, I wrote an extra about how he found his kitty cat. It's a little look at his past at least. It's here if you'd like to read it: https://www.tumblr.com/wings-of-ink/771243881131081728/how-about-a-little-someth...
I'm so thrilled that you are looking forward to future updates! I am so excited to get chapter 6 going too! My plan is to try to raise funds to put toward official art via ko-fi and Patreon starting in January. When those are made, they'll be put into the game. Some artists have done some fanart already based on what they can dream up from the pinterest boards if you'd like to take a look at those. https://pin.it/2Vq0HGVzi
Enjoy your second read! I hope you find something new and interesting. ^_^
i would like to say. i enjoyed this a lot, it took a lot of time since i wanted to cherish every chapter. i liked every character. they were very unique. but i wanted to know if poly would be possible here. i love them all, i can't help it T_T. they're all so loveable!
I'm so glad you enjoyed and savored your read, my friend! I'm happy you like all the characters so much too. Sorry to say that there's no poly options for this particular story, but I'm aiming to do that in future IFs. ^_^
aaaa thats nice to know and its a shame there isn't gonna be any poly but overall i love this story you have made. i would redo every chapter on this<///3 but im very glad i have found this, i'm looking forward to your work and process!, i see a lot of potential on your story!! <3
i also plan to make my own and seeing yours has given me a lot of motivation!!
Thank you so much! I'm so excited to bring more of this story out too. There are so many juice mysteries to unravel! And heck yeah, write your story! Making them can be daunting, but stick with it. They are so rewarding too. ^_^
hello, just wrapped up the demo! depending on my time i might replay to see some of the other content i didn't lean into, but i'm solidly happy with my choices. i named myself noodles on impulse (and have been greatly amused by people's reactions to that), and to keep the theme my mule is named pasta and the wolf is named gnocchi.
nathan is a scoundrel and i love him greatly. even if he's probably up to no good. tragically he will not reciprocate my advances no matter how hard i try. zahn is very cute I love her, she's like. she's so good. such a sweetheart. told myself i would be normal about the demigod and then i met her and needless to say I am hopeless for duri. oswin gets on my nerves but I respect him, solid dude. Lakota... <3 bestie for the restie. and da and papa are fantastic. rune is cool. I hope jasper blows up rapidly. aster is on thin ice LOL
all of this basically to say I love this story so far and I will be eagerly keeping an eye on its progress!!!! you're a fantastic writer
Hello there! Love that you tried out Noodles! The plan is to go back through and add more flavor text for that and a few other name selections. I adore that you have an entire troupe of pasta, lol.
I'm trying to wiggle him in a bit more, so no worries, you'll cross paths again eventually!
Your assessments of everyone made me smile, lol. You are very wise. Thank you so much for your kind words, I'm so glad that you've found something to love here. ^_^
i so cant get enough of duri hes my man i will kill whoever else he flirts with but also aster seems interesting... :P i rushed to play as soon as i saw the update and i LOVE it, super excited for more <3 best christmas present ever fr
I tried to load my progress from my disc but it wont upload... Maybe a bug or something else perhaps? I was waiting for the update but imma start from the 1st chapter now lol
anyway, Dear author you have golden hands! I luv everything!!!!
Not necessarily a bug, but saves were going to be broken for sure. Some of the code from the first chapters had to be altered to get Ch 5 to work, and in order to get fonts to change correctly I had to change a few other things around - it was a whole deal. But future updates should also include a skip function so just in case saves break or you just want to try other things that will be an option instead of speedrunning 300million passages, lol. I am glad you still love it though, my dear, you are too kind. ^_^
I went back into the game today, and all my saves and progress were gone. Every time I opened the game they would be there, but today is an exception. I was just about to start Chapter 4, too. I will download my saves for my next playthrough, though I imagine it will take a few days to get back to where I was. But the game is definitely worth that time.
I'm so sorry, my friend. I knew saves would break. There was just too much that ended up changing for chapter 5 to work. I will be implementing a skip function as a sort of failsafe in the future though. Thank you for sticking with it though and spending the time to get through it. ^_^
Weirdly after a few replays oswin s growing on me I found him a bit dry on the early chapters but he seems to have more a personality in chapters 4 too 5 Duri will always be best boy though for me will there ever be a poly route?
Thank you so much! Zahn gave me so many fits, so this really helps! (Spent 4 hours troubleshooting their whole scene today, lol). Glad you enjoyed my friend!
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came in to check if you updated - and the squeal I made when I saw the new update !!!! Oh my goodness, Oswin has my entire heart. My boy. My little troubled boy. We're both going through it. I'm also so so interested in the other ROs, I'll start a new save for each of them !! But for now. Focus on the boy. Oswin <3 Patiently waiting for more chapters, take all the time you need !! Marinate the story as long as you need !!!
Yay! I'm glad you had a delightful surprise waiting. I'm currently marinating the chapter 6 outline. I am terrifically excited about it too. ^_^
This is mean, you're being mean. How can I possibly pick between the ROs? Zahn is the only one I am sure I want as a purely platonic buddy (who I will protect with my life) and everyone else is pulling at my heart strings and it's not fair–
I am mostly sorry! LOL I am thrilled that you are so torn, though, and you've found a lot to love. ^_^
hpw does Oswin handle MC when theyre passed out and or having a thing? (i forgot what it was called) ,, we don't see it in game, and i wanna know! also, i love Oswin so much YWYSIODFHDPHF
That might be a POV for later, my friend. Or Oswin may tell MC himself during a conversation in chapter 6 (I'm still outlining so I can't say for sure yet). I am currently working on an extra for Tumblr to celebrate hitting over 2000 followers. It covers MC's "cursed birthday" from Oswin's eyes and should be published this month. It will probably be on itch since my idea is to make it interactive (mainly just adding your MC's details). ^_^
Is there a way to be a trans MC? I haven't gotten very far so I'd like to know before i get too far into the story T_T
Technically there isn't anything in that's specific about a trans MC. My thinking when I did the character creation as it is was that, at least in this world, whoever you are - you just are. That's kinda how I see myself because I've always been in a grey area for my own identity. So, I just am. That's why I didn't enter any sort of specified option for transitioning. Just know I am still giving thought to the subject and I may change my current design in the future as long as I can make it a meaningful one to readers. Hope this helps! ^_^
(Just as a note in case it is something you'd like to know, for any of the moments that they can come into play, MC's bits are defined by the reader and not the pronouns.)
New update is so good? It hooked me even more really. There's so much question going through my head as I was playing this. The release of chapter 5 further expanded the intensity of MC's situation. Keep up the great work! :3
I wish to see more of this and will keep rooting for this IF.
Good luck!❤️
Thank you, my dear! I am so glad you enjoyed it and to have you rooting for this story! ^_^
(〃° ^ °〃) Oswin>>>
🥲
The new chapter was so good!! Absolutely love the new explicit scenes tbh my MC enjoys seeking fun so I'm quite satisfied 🤭 I actually like Jun a lot, he was so cute and hot like damn can we meet again 🤣 Also it was nice to finally meet Rune, he was nicer and more interesting than I expected him to be. Aster was a pleasant surprise! Ngl he's so sus, like I'm 100% skeptical about him and yet I can't help but be into him LOL He got this dangerous and mysterious thing going on and I like it 😳 Thanks for the update, it was a delight to play!! Looking forward to chapter 6 🫶
I am so glad you liked it! Jun was a joy to write, I feel like plucking him from this world and plopping him as a RO in another, lol. Rune is a character I've felt is better experienced than explained, so I'm happy they were a pleasant surprise for you. And 100% cannot fault you for finding Aster a little sus, lol (someone on Tumblr affectionately calls him ASSter and I really feel that). ^_^
Your writing is so fire ❤️🔥 I'm so invested in this game. Every character feels so different and alive which helps with the story immersion. The main thing I like is how flexible the choices are for MC's personality, like it feels great not to be forced to act in a certain way just bcoz it's the default setting for MC. My MC feels like her own person and I love it. (Also love how everyone is charmed by MC's beauty HAHA kinda Mary Sue but I absolutely love being charming so well done!!)
Thank you so much! I'm glad you mentioned the personality system because I'm currently wondering if I should stick with it for my next IF or try something new. I think the method in GC has been the favored one though. LOL MC is a bit Mary Sue (Mary Cue? MC - :D - I'll stop), but one you can put through a meat grinder.
(this might be mentioned in the game too at some point, lol)The personality system is great! One thing I noticed is that when it comes to romance options, it either leans towards being super shy or being rlly bold. Maybe you could consider making the choices, from time to time, like shy but not too much / flirtatious but more subtle? I think that would be nice but ofc it's already rlly good, I like it 😌🤌 Also, Mary Sue MCs are my absolute favs bcoz why wouldnt i HAHA I need my MCs to be great characters that are significant to the story 🫶 So thanks for this! Keep up the good work and I'll be looking forward to continue playing this wonderful game!
I'm glad you like it! I have considered altering the romance system as well. I initially vetoed the more in-between actions since the personality system doesn't use a middle-ground option either (saves me a lot of coding and struggling to find an in-between option that feels natural). But the personality extremes can still kinda pass sometimes for a middle-ground response - they just don't feel as uniquely "this or that" to me. It wouldn't be too difficult to add another flirting method either. I'll do some thinking on it! Thank you, my dear! I can't wait to see how this project grows. ^_^
lunan had to replay this im begging once again, but this time for more nathanael interactions i can't get enough sdfghjk (^///^)
Totalling reading my mind, I've been thinking about that too!
This isn't quite the same, but I wrote an extra about how he found his cat and posted it here if you're interested: https://www.tumblr.com/wings-of-ink/771243881131081728/how-about-a-little-someth...
You get to see a glimpse of him during a different stage of his life. ^_^
MORE NATHAN CONTENT HGFDEWDSDFRGTAHYJ thank you!!!! also happy new year lunan and mr lunan, i hope its a great one for you guys <333
You're very welcome! And happy new year to you! Me and Mr. Lunan welcomed two kitties into our family today so we are set for the year, lol. :3
Oh that's great!!! Congrats and have fun with the kitties :)
Thank you! They're doing wonderfully,
and knocking everything overand I love it, lol.HELLO HELLO
meliodas is back again for chapter 5
(wheeze) this harem- i mean friend group for our MC is incredibly awesome
rune seems like such a fancy (gal, i made them a gal in my playthrough) mage
had to restart from the beginning so I speedran it as Fiorayne again, named the horse Luchika and the wolf Rondine. if you didn't see my first comment i'm a huge monster hunter nerd LOL.
however if i had to choose my favorite oswin is just him
childhood friend who's risking his ass to save us and him talking about how he felt "useless"
resonates with me fr
current ranking of our mc's party
1. oswin (i vibe with him heavy)
2. rune (she's cool. also i love bard characters)
3. duri (he's such a silly, getting bitten by my horsie luchika)
4. zahn (he's so sweet and precious aaaaaaa)
all 4 of them are absolutely excellent and i would gladly befriend any of them
can't wait for god-cursed to finish because I AM GOING TO PLAY THROUGH IT MULTIPLE TIMES
mrs lunan your writing is incredible and you have me invested so badly
you truly are a brilliant writer fr <3
in the words of Senator Palpatine
"We will watch your career with great interest."
also i do hope you enjoyed the monster hunter rise soundtrack!!! really gives more atmosphere when I read, cus I listen to music that's appropriate whenever I read something story (chill music for most parts, fight music for fights, and other thematically appropriate songs)
that's enough yapping from me
Love, LightningMeliodas
P.S. [i'm writing my own IF story and coding is incredibly painful. tips would be very much appreciated].
hindsight note: DAMMIT I ALREADY USED THE PALPATINE QUOTE IN MY FIRST REVIEW
ToT
IM SORRY I NEED TO FIND A NEW QUOTE WHEN CHAPTER 6 COMES OUT
No worries, I still enjoyed it the second time too, lol.
Hello again, my friend! I am so thrilled you enjoyed this installment as well! And I did have a listen to that soundtrack and it rocks! I listened to it on repeat while I worked and wrote, lol. I've never played Monster Hunter but I'd like to check it out sometime.
I'm happy to try and give you some insight on coding if you like. I'm no expert at all, but if I can help guide you I will. If you're on Tumbrl you can pop out an ask or something to me with your questions, I won't publish your answers if you don't want me to, I can just message you back. ^_^
o shit my save got deleted :((( (I'm rlly stupid so I didnt make a backup lmao)
same 😭😭
So sorry! I'm trying to work out how to prevent that but my laptop is old and cranky. 😅
It's okay haha dw 🙏 I took it as a sign for me to replay and it was absolutely enjoyable
I'm so glad! I'm a fan of replaying myself, though it can get tedious, so I appreciate that you took the time. ^_^
I'm so sorry! 😭 The hard saves were broken too I think.
I've been trying to figure out Butler to run updates without shattering everything but my old laptop refuses to even install it. I need to patch ch 5 but I don't want to do it until I can either convince my laptop to work or borrow another computer.
lmao it's fine dw abt it XD just gives me an excuse to replay
Hey I love this thinking, lol. Anytime an IF updates I end up restarting anyway because my memory is faulty after reading 400 other stories lol.
THATS SO REAL I HAVE LIKE SO MANY IFS THAT I'M READING AT THE SAME TIME 😭🙏
OSWIN MY POOKIE COOKIE WOOKIE BEAR I LOVE HIM SOMEONE PUT ME DOWN IM RABID
realest opinion about Oswin, I agree strongly.
Lol he'd be a flustered mess if he read this.
AGH I just LOVE this IF so much! Rarely do I find an IF that I love all the RO's a lot, though Oswin will be my all-time favorite♥
That scene with Oswin talking about how he was "useless"(Or at least I'm pretty sure that's what he said, Bad memory ಥ_ಥ) made me wanna cry and Hug him forever💔
I can't wait for the next update (◍•ᴗ•◍)
Is it awful that I want to poly romanticatize all the characters?! I really appreciate and love the merchant man! (/≧▽≦)/ Oh man, I THINK I'M IN LOVE WITH THEM ALL! I really enjoy that my MC has a meekly kind personality and all the characters fine her cute, cause when I attempted to flirt, it failed but in the end works and I LOVE IT! (Oswin is such an overprotective man, if only I can see what's he's really hiding though!) Oh, and uhm... Zahn, such a cutie pie! (*´ω｀*) But then Duri, you damn sly dog, I hate it and love it at the same time, such a tease! Oh Rune, my heart, ack, he's an hopeless romantic introverted guy that I too wanna let my character swoon more! (I wanna try to do a one night stand for MC, but I dismissed the idea, instead I wanna see how it goes for her first time with the primary love interest!) For now, chapters... I crave for more stories! I can't wait, I got myself fanning here, that's truly awesome work of fiction you've created! So far, I haven't encountered no grammar or anything wrong! Is it possible to see official art of the characters mention in the story for future update or complete final next year? I can see plenty of potential fanart right now, if any are actually made now. (人*´∀｀)｡*ﾟ+
Just, whoa, this is seriously good stuff, I think Imma do another read but changed the personality and perspective of the MC this time! <(￣︶￣)> Time to make another save slots for a different approach, heh! ( ´◡‿ゝ◡`)
That's not awful at all, dear, I'm so happy you've found something to love about all of them. If you'd like a bit more of our beloved merchant man, I wrote an extra about how he found his kitty cat. It's a little look at his past at least. It's here if you'd like to read it: https://www.tumblr.com/wings-of-ink/771243881131081728/how-about-a-little-someth...
I'm so thrilled that you are looking forward to future updates! I am so excited to get chapter 6 going too! My plan is to try to raise funds to put toward official art via ko-fi and Patreon starting in January. When those are made, they'll be put into the game. Some artists have done some fanart already based on what they can dream up from the pinterest boards if you'd like to take a look at those. https://pin.it/2Vq0HGVzi
Enjoy your second read! I hope you find something new and interesting. ^_^
All the romanceable companions are wonderful 😌🩷 I can’t choose 😩😭
I'm glad you like them all though! Just pretend you're at a buffet, you can always come back for seconds...and thirds... ^_^
you’re so right :))
i would like to say. i enjoyed this a lot, it took a lot of time since i wanted to cherish every chapter. i liked every character. they were very unique. but i wanted to know if poly would be possible here. i love them all, i can't help it T_T. they're all so loveable!
I'm so glad you enjoyed and savored your read, my friend! I'm happy you like all the characters so much too. Sorry to say that there's no poly options for this particular story, but I'm aiming to do that in future IFs. ^_^
aaaa thats nice to know and its a shame there isn't gonna be any poly but overall i love this story you have made. i would redo every chapter on this<///3 but im very glad i have found this, i'm looking forward to your work and process!, i see a lot of potential on your story!! <3
i also plan to make my own and seeing yours has given me a lot of motivation!!
Thank you so much! I'm so excited to bring more of this story out too. There are so many juice mysteries to unravel! And heck yeah, write your story! Making them can be daunting, but stick with it. They are so rewarding too. ^_^
hello, just wrapped up the demo! depending on my time i might replay to see some of the other content i didn't lean into, but i'm solidly happy with my choices. i named myself noodles on impulse (and have been greatly amused by people's reactions to that), and to keep the theme my mule is named pasta and the wolf is named gnocchi.
nathan is a scoundrel and i love him greatly. even if he's probably up to no good. tragically he will not reciprocate my advances no matter how hard i try. zahn is very cute I love her, she's like. she's so good. such a sweetheart. told myself i would be normal about the demigod and then i met her and needless to say I am hopeless for duri. oswin gets on my nerves but I respect him, solid dude. Lakota... <3 bestie for the restie. and da and papa are fantastic. rune is cool. I hope jasper blows up rapidly. aster is on thin ice LOL
all of this basically to say I love this story so far and I will be eagerly keeping an eye on its progress!!!! you're a fantastic writer
Hello there! Love that you tried out Noodles! The plan is to go back through and add more flavor text for that and a few other name selections. I adore that you have an entire troupe of pasta, lol.
If you'd like just a little bit more Nathan, there's a mini story posted about how he met Shadow here https://www.tumblr.com/wings-of-ink/771243881131081728/how-about-a-little-someth...
I'm trying to wiggle him in a bit more, so no worries, you'll cross paths again eventually!
Your assessments of everyone made me smile, lol. You are very wise. Thank you so much for your kind words, I'm so glad that you've found something to love here. ^_^
Yay! I got a pet! Loved the update! Didn't disappoint at all
After all you've been through, there's no way your parents can say that you can't keep her either, lol. Glad you loved it, my dear! ^_^
An update! Yeah I have been waiting! I love your work!
My gift to you! Hope you enjoyed! ^_^
The update was amazing! I love this story so much and am always looking forward to more!
Thank you my friend! I'm so happy you enjoyed it! Can't wait to get going on chapter 6, so many fun scenes to write. ^_^
i so cant get enough of duri hes my man
i will kill whoever else he flirts withbut also aster seems interesting... :P i rushed to play as soon as i saw the update and i LOVE it, super excited for more <3 best christmas present ever frzahn is absolutely adorable im in love!!!!
Very sweet, 10/10, would feed again.
Duri has great insticts and probably senses the danger lol. He'll do his part by paying you special attention. 🐺
I'm so glad you enjoyed your early Christmas present! ^_^
back again to announce my undying love for oswin.
lovely chapter. lovely new characters. super excited for the next one. <3
Welcome back! I'm happy you enjoyed it. Oswin will be pleased. ^_^
I tried to load my progress from my disc but it wont upload... Maybe a bug or something else perhaps? I was waiting for the update but imma start from the 1st chapter now lol
anyway, Dear author you have golden hands! I luv everything!!!!
Not necessarily a bug, but saves were going to be broken for sure. Some of the code from the first chapters had to be altered to get Ch 5 to work, and in order to get fonts to change correctly I had to change a few other things around - it was a whole deal. But future updates should also include a skip function so just in case saves break or you just want to try other things that will be an option instead of speedrunning 300million passages, lol. I am glad you still love it though, my dear, you are too kind. ^_^
ahh, didnt know saves could be broken... thanks for updates and making things much much better <33
nice game right here keep the work up its one of my favorites following up to speaker and crimson veil and a few select others
Thank you, my friend! I LOVE Speaker too. Haven't heard of Crimson Veil though, is that on itchio?
yep its a vampire game who uses rpgmaker
LETS GOO
Where are we going!? :D
lol
I went back into the game today, and all my saves and progress were gone. Every time I opened the game they would be there, but today is an exception. I was just about to start Chapter 4, too. I will download my saves for my next playthrough, though I imagine it will take a few days to get back to where I was. But the game is definitely worth that time.
I'm so sorry, my friend. I knew saves would break. There was just too much that ended up changing for chapter 5 to work. I will be implementing a skip function as a sort of failsafe in the future though. Thank you for sticking with it though and spending the time to get through it. ^_^
Yayyy chapter five so happy right now
You and me both! ^_^
Weirdly after a few replays oswin s growing on me I found him a bit dry on the early chapters but he seems to have more a personality in chapters 4 too 5 Duri will always be best boy though for me will there ever be a poly route?
Love it . can't wait for the update.
Glad you enjoyed my dear! I anticipate chapter 6 sometime between this coming March and May. ^_^
awesome. Have a great christmas and a happy new year.
Thank you, my friend, but that's actually MC being sarcastic. They're trying to antagonize Oswin a bit.
I think I found a Error in the spicy part with Zahn. Also I played till the end and this story is sooo good. I cant wait for more❤
Thank you so much! Zahn gave me so many fits, so this really helps! (Spent 4 hours troubleshooting their whole scene today, lol). Glad you enjoyed my friend!
Thank you for blessing me with this update tonight!!! I love your work so much!! Can't wait to read more <333
You are very welcome dear, I hope you enjoy it! ^_^