Dude this looks sick as hell and I want to know what happens next so bad you don't understand-
In all seriousness it's written quite well and I like the setting. I haven't seen this kind of idea as a book much if not at all so rahhh it's so cool! I dunno what else to say besides it's very interesting and the lore is really intriguing!
Commented 5 months ago but yeah… this is still my first pick LMAO. Plus the chance of having ACE as a potential RO is enticing (cool ass robots/sentient tech my beloved)
Just finished reading all the concepts and all of them are such good ideas but this is definitely my favourite! The idea is so interesting and I already love the bond between MC and the rest of the team (Sol is my favourite for now!) I'm really excited to read more from you!
I’m already so excited for this! This is the first one I read, will get through all your other stories in between work. I loved Winter and the mysterious janitor HAHA
hmm so ive read every possible second if shorts (Guess who finally had time too!!) and GAHHH this is by far my favorite one, hoping it will come alive (Please AI RO if this story happens im a sucker for non-human X human ill even give my firstborn /hj
I love Love LOVE Sol, I gotta say this is my fav out of your possible new IFs, theyre all amazing but,, protective Sol is my weakness, I want them so bad (also them calling us badger,,, my heart)
If this story is the one that trumps the rest--Give us the option for AI romance haha!
Though honestly, Winter is such a softie I love her. You're right in this not exactly being sci-fi but not completely Cyberpunk and yet it's definitely in between it and fits perfectly right there. I'm sitting here wondering if we're like going with the route of Eleven from Stranger Things--which is not bad, I love that entire concept of that. But also it feels also very techy what with the body having some cybernetics in it so maybe it's also that way. It's difficult but I honestly like the idea of this.
I certainly love all the characters already, definitely biased with Winter and ACE. ♥ They're both precious even if I do love the chara types of Ev'ren and Soltis.
P.S I love the funny options on the faves hahaha. Oh 3rd floor janitor! So cute! hahaha!
Absolutely foaming at the mouth. Soltis YOU SWEETIE, also absolutely love the option of your character skipping the crushing phase and going "let's get married". LMAO, finally I can create a character as desperate as I am... also the premise of the story is so heartwrenching and I love it. You're such a wonderful writer, would love to lock you away and eat everything you write (jkjk... unless?)
This was sick, i love the concept, game me s1 stranger things vibes ( hope thats not insulting), the ros are all so sweet. if this is tuned into an actual project i hope we get to met the 3rd floor janitor
Out of all the stories written I like this one the best and would be excited to see it develop into a full game. My ranking from top to bottom is: Lab Rat, Moonlight protocol, The Howl, Daddy was a Killer, and Lost to time.
I was absolutely hypnotized in the beginning! I also love how you can choose some goofy options like the meatball one, it's so cute and I love when I have options like that :)
After we leave the room, though, I didn't have much interest. The writing and plot direction felt a bit confusing and disappointing for me. I can see this having potential though :)
It's hard to put into words, but if you need more details I shall try my best
I absolutely loved this one, I was on the edge of my seat the entire time, and I really felt the connection to the characters. Of your demos, this one is my favorite. I'm a sucker for a good mystery though, and I'm excited to see what the MC is capable of. Very good, Janitor on the 3rd floor/10
oh yeah this one is the one. i can feel it in my bones. (i still have lost to time left to read but im too hooked to this one already but might be surprised)
edit: so my tentative ranking of the 5 are like this:
Lab Rat, Moonlight Protocol, Daddy was a Killer, Lost to Time but it’s a close thing with DWAK maybe, and then finally The Howl.
To be quite honest though, I just adore your writing anyways and would love to eventually read anything you put out. Your love interests are always so compelling. Winter and Rholm stood out to me the most 🥹 and this is as someone who doesn’t usually go for the gentle types but you always have a way to make me pick the gentle ones. AHEM OSWIN AHEM. (unrelated but i would give my life for that man)
I regret looking up efff33... my poor eyes (and in the middle of the night too).
edit: reading all the demos, it's really hard to choose a favorite. But if i had to, from 1st to 5th: Lab Rat, Moonlight Protocol, Daddy was a Killer, Lost to Time (honestly tied with Daddy was a Killer), and lastly The Howl.
"Lab Rat" is my favorite. I love the plot and I'm dying to see how it continues. MC's life is tragic in all the IFs, but somehow this one has gotten a soft spot in my heart and I really want to know more about their story. I also love the ROs, I'm excited to know more about them. Specially Winter, got my heart almost since the first moment they appeared.
"The Howl" is second for me. I find the idea of a not-so-legal organization helping people on MC's situation and offering them a way to, somehow, figure things out very interesting. I also want to catch my MC's evil twin and kick her ass. I like all the characters and their personalities. I'm curious about their stories too and what took them there.
Then, "Moonlight Protocol" and "Lost to Time" tied for me. I'm not really into sci-fi, but they're both really interesting as well. If I had to chose between these two, I'd pick the one that you enjoy writing the most.
Finally, "Daddy was a killer" has a very interesting plot as well, it just ended as the last one because I liked the others better.
This was so good- at first Howl was my top but as soon as I finished reading through this demo- My love for all the characters shot through the roof- like i really like how it started and eeee Mc is lwk the best- i love it a lot haha
Daddy Was a Killer is still my favorite, but this is definitely a close second! Badger is tragic but also adorable, and the scene with Winter was so wholesome
the things I like - the dynamic of the team and their bond with the MC (traumabonded!!!! :D I'm mainly joking) but it's really sweet, how much they care for one another and them, the romance I think would hit really well. I love the mystery surrounding the MC's bsckstory, even when we peek into our own files. There's still so many delicious questions, like why are we the sole survivor, who killed everyone, who were our parents, what exactly were we being tested for?. It's so interesting!!
I love the hint at the somewhat recovery the MC has made, and how realistic it feels. Idk where to put this but ACE is the goat I have a soft spot for sentient AI that want to protect their humans well being (especially when he expressed concern over not censoring the footage or the MC reaction to the cages)
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Dude this looks sick as hell and I want to know what happens next so bad you don't understand-
In all seriousness it's written quite well and I like the setting. I haven't seen this kind of idea as a book much if not at all so rahhh it's so cool! I dunno what else to say besides it's very interesting and the lore is really intriguing!
*vibrates on my seat as I count the days to the end of august*
7/5 well done, can't wait to see what you do next with this.
Eh😭 I don’t know how to explain it, this one feels kinda flat in comparison to the others..
This one and Daddy was a killer are my top two so far
Commented 5 months ago but yeah… this is still my first pick LMAO. Plus the chance of having ACE as a potential RO is enticing (cool ass robots/sentient tech my beloved)
The third floor janitor...
Yeah this is the one for sure. I beg of it
PLEASE THIS ONE
rankings-
1. Lab Rat
2. Moonlight protocol
3. The Howl
4. Daddy was a Killer
5. Lost to Time
Absolutely yes!
I am very late for this, but I do reckon that this one is my favourite. The Android one and Lost to Time are very close seconds, though!
Just finished reading all the concepts and all of them are such good ideas but this is definitely my favourite! The idea is so interesting and I already love the bond between MC and the rest of the team (Sol is my favourite for now!) I'm really excited to read more from you!
This was absolutely fantastic, I don't know what to say, all your new IF concepts are brilliant.
I’m already so excited for this! This is the first one I read, will get through all your other stories in between work. I loved Winter and the mysterious janitor HAHA
(also I saw one typo)
hmm so ive read every possible second if shorts (Guess who finally had time too!!) and GAHHH this is by far my favorite one, hoping it will come alive (Please AI RO if this story happens im a sucker for non-human X human ill even give my firstborn /hj
I love Love LOVE Sol, I gotta say this is my fav out of your possible new IFs, theyre all amazing but,, protective Sol is my weakness, I want them so bad (also them calling us badger,,, my heart)
If this story is the one that trumps the rest--Give us the option for AI romance haha!
Though honestly, Winter is such a softie I love her. You're right in this not exactly being sci-fi but not completely Cyberpunk and yet it's definitely in between it and fits perfectly right there. I'm sitting here wondering if we're like going with the route of Eleven from Stranger Things--which is not bad, I love that entire concept of that. But also it feels also very techy what with the body having some cybernetics in it so maybe it's also that way. It's difficult but I honestly like the idea of this.
I certainly love all the characters already, definitely biased with Winter and ACE. ♥ They're both precious even if I do love the chara types of Ev'ren and Soltis.
P.S I love the funny options on the faves hahaha. Oh 3rd floor janitor! So cute! hahaha!
10/10
Absolutely foaming at the mouth. Soltis YOU SWEETIE, also absolutely love the option of your character skipping the crushing phase and going "let's get married". LMAO, finally I can create a character as desperate as I am... also the premise of the story is so heartwrenching and I love it. You're such a wonderful writer, would love to lock you away and eat everything you write (jkjk... unless?)
This was sick, i love the concept, game me s1 stranger things vibes ( hope thats not insulting), the ros are all so sweet. if this is tuned into an actual project i hope we get to met the 3rd floor janitor
The 3rd floor janitor my beloved.
I ADORE this one. My absolute favorite of the bunch. Winter stole my heart and soul immediately.
Out of all the stories written I like this one the best and would be excited to see it develop into a full game. My ranking from top to bottom is: Lab Rat, Moonlight protocol, The Howl, Daddy was a Killer, and Lost to time.
I was absolutely hypnotized in the beginning! I also love how you can choose some goofy options like the meatball one, it's so cute and I love when I have options like that :)
After we leave the room, though, I didn't have much interest. The writing and plot direction felt a bit confusing and disappointing for me. I can see this having potential though :)
It's hard to put into words, but if you need more details I shall try my best
I absolutely loved this one, I was on the edge of my seat the entire time, and I really felt the connection to the characters. Of your demos, this one is my favorite. I'm a sucker for a good mystery though, and I'm excited to see what the MC is capable of. Very good, Janitor on the 3rd floor/10
oh yeah this one is the one. i can feel it in my bones. (i still have lost to time left to read but im too hooked to this one already but might be surprised)
edit: so my tentative ranking of the 5 are like this:
Lab Rat, Moonlight Protocol, Daddy was a Killer, Lost to Time but it’s a close thing with DWAK maybe, and then finally The Howl.
To be quite honest though, I just adore your writing anyways and would love to eventually read anything you put out. Your love interests are always so compelling. Winter and Rholm stood out to me the most 🥹 and this is as someone who doesn’t usually go for the gentle types but you always have a way to make me pick the gentle ones. AHEM OSWIN AHEM. (unrelated but i would give my life for that man)
I regret looking up efff33... my poor eyes (and in the middle of the night too).
edit: reading all the demos, it's really hard to choose a favorite. But if i had to, from 1st to 5th: Lab Rat, Moonlight Protocol, Daddy was a Killer, Lost to Time (honestly tied with Daddy was a Killer), and lastly The Howl.
"Lab Rat" is my favorite. I love the plot and I'm dying to see how it continues. MC's life is tragic in all the IFs, but somehow this one has gotten a soft spot in my heart and I really want to know more about their story. I also love the ROs, I'm excited to know more about them. Specially Winter, got my heart almost since the first moment they appeared.
"The Howl" is second for me. I find the idea of a not-so-legal organization helping people on MC's situation and offering them a way to, somehow, figure things out very interesting. I also want to catch my MC's evil twin and kick her ass. I like all the characters and their personalities. I'm curious about their stories too and what took them there.
Then, "Moonlight Protocol" and "Lost to Time" tied for me. I'm not really into sci-fi, but they're both really interesting as well. If I had to chose between these two, I'd pick the one that you enjoy writing the most.
Finally, "Daddy was a killer" has a very interesting plot as well, it just ended as the last one because I liked the others better.
This was so good- at first Howl was my top but as soon as I finished reading through this demo- My love for all the characters shot through the roof- like i really like how it started and eeee Mc is lwk the best- i love it a lot haha
Daddy Was a Killer is still my favorite, but this is definitely a close second! Badger is tragic but also adorable, and the scene with Winter was so wholesome
ooo another one I am going to love, I am loving the Mc lab rat type o3o and can't wait to romance all the men in here too
Just finished this one. I'm honestly loving this one so far and I would be super happy to have more content about Lab Rat!
I'm super curious about the MC and what happened in their past. (Also I'm a huge sucker for IF romances)
This one is super interesting !!
the things I like - the dynamic of the team and their bond with the MC (traumabonded!!!! :D I'm mainly joking) but it's really sweet, how much they care for one another and them, the romance I think would hit really well. I love the mystery surrounding the MC's bsckstory, even when we peek into our own files. There's still so many delicious questions, like why are we the sole survivor, who killed everyone, who were our parents, what exactly were we being tested for?. It's so interesting!!
I love the hint at the somewhat recovery the MC has made, and how realistic it feels. Idk where to put this but ACE is the goat I have a soft spot for sentient AI that want to protect their humans well being (especially when he expressed concern over not censoring the footage or the MC reaction to the cages)
This one def goes in the top spot
This one has got to be my favorite, I want to know what happened before and what happens next so bad!!!!