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If Kip or Dov die I'm giving you a ONE STAR rating

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love Oswin sm i actually feel like im betraying him by flirting with the others LMAO

cant wait for him to open up more! <3

Really enjoying this so far!

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When can we expect chapter 6? Please take your time, everything you've written so far is a masterpiece, but is there a timeframe you have when you'd like to try and post it? Just to give us readers something to look forward to?

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My goal is this summer (it's summer on my end of the globe at least). I am hoping to have it out to subscribers on Ko-fi and Patreon by the end of July or even into early August. And then the public release would go out 30 days after that. My personal life has been...on fire here and there since January, so it's delayed production substantially. But I'm still truckin' and determined!

I haven't set a firm deadline since I tend to not do well with them. I did that with chapter 5 and then had to cut some of the detail out of the end. I've fixed it for the next update though, so you'll get a little more in Ch 5 plus a huge new chapter. I just have a few sections to go, so I feel like my goal is obtainable. 

Thanks for hanging in there! ^_^

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I completely understand the firm deadline thing. I'm sure I speak for all of the readers when I say, take your time, do what's best for you. Your current method is what gives us this amazing story, so we are willing to wait however long we need to

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*bounces up and down with excitement*

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~Dear Lunan

I do not know you, and i sincerely hope you don't know me, as I am, frankly extremely awkward, and probably a loser, and while I try not to ask to much of people, for I find it hard to, BUT... if i may ask~ neh, BEG for one thing for this work of art and passion, its that you don't make me chose one, I physically can not, for I love them all DEARLY, and can not muster up the strength to not romance most... IF not all of them.


~sincerely a indecisive (and admittedly probably polyamorous) Raccoon <3

(btw i love the game and the cats)

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~Dearest Racoon Mage,

I love awkward people; I am also awkward if you can believe it. That's why I write instead of make videos or speak in any capacity, lol. And you are definitely not a loser because you left a lovely message that brought me a lot of joy when you could have just moved along. 

Sadly, I will have to make you choose one - at least one at a time. The best I can give is the ability to flirt and romance everyone at once until a point, and then make a few saves, lol. But who knows how I will change in the coming months, perhaps you'll have your wish in ways I do not yet expect.


~much love, (mostly monogamous but open minded) Lunan <3

PS:  cats make everything better

PPS:  I plan for future IFs to have poly options :3

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i love all the ROs help is this the greed they talked about in the bible

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LOL, probably.

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AAHH THIS WAS AMAZING. I need to replay this a million times over and over. Please dont abandon this, this is great!!

im in love with Duri and Oswin.

So glad you enjoyed it! I will not abandon this, I'm doggedly determined to complete it even if it takes a while. Duri and Oswin is a fun combo too, lol.

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Whats the meaning of this dialog tags as ? ♡ ? and ♡♡, do u have closer info ig cause I cant find it ;(. 

Tysm for the lovely game

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i think it means love and stuff, but the second one is explicit

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I think that's my bad. I may have accidentally taken out the info for that. But the single heart is a flirt option, double heart is a flirt/romance option that leads to physical affection or sexual act of some kind. I'll be sure to check for that by the next update, I have changed the landing page so many times that I don't remember what it looks like, lol. And you don't have to select any heart options for romances either, if you're curious. :D

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Oswin is the love of my life, I will follow that man to hell and back. Likely mentally. 


Seriously though, this game is incredible. I actually recommended this game to someone who wanted to write better flashbacks. The writing is masterful, the characters are interesting, and I'm deeply in love with the world. Oh, and I LOVE my character. I appreciate the customization.

He could use a love like that. I am so happy that you love it so much, dear. It's brought me a lot of joy and life to make, all the better if it can spark for you as well. I'm also thrilled you love your MC, they're legit my favorite character, lol. ^_^

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Just went from start to finish (last time I did that was before chapter 5 came out I believe) and I'm really enjoying how this is going! I'm a Duri lover rn <3

There's some choice Duri moments upcoming for chapter 6 too. :D

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I fell in love with this IF a few months ago, im graduating tomorrow and im playing this in a new run tonight because its so beautiful and its calming my jitters

That's double awesome! Congratulations on your graduation! I'm glad that this can provide you some relief from the jitters - I've been there and it suuuucks.

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Choosing between Zahn and Duri will be the death of me🙏

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I hope not, I've never written a eulogy before...

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pleease pleaseeeee abeg dont abandon this like many IF authors have

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No worries there, my dear. This is my lifeblood right now. ^_^

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Thank you I Cant wait to see what you've cooked up

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Im enjoying this so far...kinda torn between Oswin and Duri tbh but leaning towards Duri bc the contrast between him and my MC (a sincere, shy, and kind cook) is very amusing

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Oh I am also a sucker for a good "opposites" type romance!

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Omg I can't wait to go back to Da and Papa again TT (my character is more focused on their fathers and fam-extended rn than romance lol)

Awe! I love that! They are very ready to have their favorite child back too. ^_^

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this is SO good! i am absolutely in love with Zahn and Duri and i am not sure how i am going to choose. the writing is so good, all the characters have me hooked. i love my two dads! i will be eagerly awaiting an update. 

Thank you, my dear! The more you learn about them, the easier it may get to choose (maybe), lol. Chapter 6 will reveal more about both but Zahn will be more forthcoming for the moment. 

And your dads are sooo ready to welcome you back home. 🥰

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I'm so glad I stumbled upon this. Oswin has shot up to being one of my favorite ROs. I love the dynamics he shares with MC, specifically how bold MC can get under his skin and fluster him (I need more flustered ROs!), but I also enjoy his character depth and the darker areas he struggles with. Looking forward to seeing how his romance will unravel.

But as a whole, this IF is well-written and crafted. All the ROs are interesting and with entertaining intimate moments. There's never a dull moment - the story is packed with adventure and intrigue. 

Agreed! I love playing either super shy MCs with bold ROs or the opposite with almost no in-betweens lol.

I'm so glad Oswin has made an impact with you. His character arch takes a big leap in the next chapter too, I think you will find more to love.

I appreciate your kindness, my dear. I'm trying my best to make this an adventure all the way through.  ^_^

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can i just kiss oswin pls😭

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FRRR

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I'll consult the Magic-8 ball 🎱




Sources say.....





Maybe....


😁

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So excited for chapter 6!!!

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It's in the oven! Taking longer than I had hoped with life things cooking at the same time, but we're getting there! 😆

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SINCE THIS IS A DEMO WILL THE COMPLETE VERSION COST?

(THIS IS SOO GOOD I NEED MORE😭😭😭)

Those details are far from decided I'm afraid. The future is still unclear about it. As soon as it clears though, I'll post the information! ^_^

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This story broadly fits some themes that I struggle with a lot, like getting too frustrated and can't read stories with it, the whole weak link protagonist thing. It's very triggering for my irl problems. Had read on tumblr in an ask that it's not so perpetual, but even if it was this does such a good job of not making that the MC's personality. Like, how forward you can be about flirting, being honestly very dominant in some of those scenes; normally the protagonists in the stories I mean are only allowed to be stammering blushing messes. And, besides that, there's continuously choices that let me as the MC express the frustration and guilt and everything. Being able to acknowledge how bullshit and unfair the hand that was dealt is in the story itself is huge for making it feel like it actually matters, for resolving some of the tension as like proof that the author and the characters all care. None of that is the case in the other stories I reference, and it does so much.

I really really enjoy this, much as I still experience the frustration like a comment further down also talks about, and I never would've thought I could for something that would hit some triggers like that.

Also want to mention how much I love a lot of the flirting, for reasons already mentioned but also just how mature they feel. Don't know how else to describe it but I like it a lot. I know there's no poly but I'm looking forward to doing whatever thing I can manage with Duri and Zahn (which again goes with the maturity and variety the flirting and romance and sex has here).

Poor Oswin getting so big brother-y from watching first some random pilgrim and then an actual wolf fucking tripping over themselves to smooch the MC, it's very very funny

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I appreciate your words my dear, this was very introspective for me. Not that I take joy in frustrating you, but one of my goals for this projects is for readers to truly feel it. As much as my skill allows, I want it to be an immersive experience in both trials and victories. Naturally, we're still in the trials phase, lol.

I'm glad you like the flirting too! I try to make it as authentic as possible. I love IFs but sometimes the flirting is a little....dry toast for my liking 😆. 

Oswin is 100% big brothery or maybe even territorial when it comes to the others, at least at first lol. Zahn and Duri more so I think. It's an adjustment for him, but a fun one to read. ^_^

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i need to kiss oswin i love that man. i also miss my parents. 10/10

Oswin could use a kiss for sure and the parents need their kid back sooooo much. 🥰

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